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Unquestionably, its speed is high
and it drifts swiftly by
Frantically turning and twisting
the surface begins its misting
no matter how much I try to climb
I will never reach it in time
I accept it at last
looking out into the endless vast
i'm sinking into the churning bowl
the water dark like charcoal
My aching muscles begin to give up
for this ending, a fleshy cup
sinking lower, to swell and rise
the glittering waves cover the skies
is this the way that I should have gone
if only it weren't for that cad, that con
to throw me over for refusing
he simply could not except losing
I never bend easily at a whim
especially not for one such as him
as I depart, the world is finally dim
blast it all, I never learned to swim

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:icondreamkeepr-soultellr:
wowww

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Theres two ways of life.
which path u choose is the path u take.
U dont take a path ur life will never start.
Ask me what path i took,
i will only hang my head.
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I think I missed your comment from months ago. Thanks! ^_^

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"A still more glorious dawn awaits: not a sunrise, but a galaxy rise - a morning filled with four hundred billion suns: the rising of the Milky Way." - Carl Sagan
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beautiful. really emotive and.. just great.

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I might just lose my mind and rob a lace shop.

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